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    [-Poem-] : The Beaten Child's Plea


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    [-Poem-] : The Beaten Child's Plea

    Post by Evie on Thu Jul 21, 2011 12:59 pm

    I lay in my bed, as still as i can be
    Laying in utter silence
    So that they won't notice me
    I pretend to be asleep
    Some where far away in a dream
    Because when they think I'm asleep
    That's the only time I'm free
    My name is Carrie
    I'm 8 years old.
    I cook, I clean
    I do what I'm told.
    My grades are good.
    Mostly A's
    And if I only cry 4 times then it's been a good day.
    My life is simple,
    Yet no one can see,
    That I live in a broken home
    Where two parents beat on me.
    Daddy hits and yells
    and then Mommy takes a turn.
    Screaming the whole time
    That I'm getting what I deserve
    Mommy uses her fist,
    While Daddy uses a belt
    They take turns in taking breaks
    While my beating's being dealt
    I try my best not to cry,
    or at least not let them see
    Because if they see a single tear,
    That's just more beating for me.
    At night I lay in my bed, a sheet which lay on the floor,
    I lay there shaking and crying, while shivering in the cold.
    I peek round the corner,
    Mommy is drinking again.
    Daddy takes a drink,
    then hands her the bottle labeled 'Gin'
    I sit against the while,
    as silent as I can be,
    I needed a drink of water,
    But didn't want to risk them seeing me.
    I glance down at me body,
    the cuts and bruises down my arm,
    Then I crawl back into my bed before I cause more harm
    I lay there and I think ,
    every princess is saved by a knight,
    But no one ever comes to save me,
    And In a world of so many cry's,
    No one heads A Beaten Child's Plea



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    Re: [-Poem-] : The Beaten Child's Plea

    Post by Seppie on Mon Aug 01, 2011 5:33 pm

    This is a great poem... but with a terrible story behind it.


    Re: [-Poem-] : The Beaten Child's Plea

    Post by Guest on Fri Aug 05, 2011 7:49 pm

    you cant fucking write at all

    Kiki is fucking banned.

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    Re: [-Poem-] : The Beaten Child's Plea

    Post by Revival on Fri Aug 05, 2011 9:13 pm

    Kiki wrote:you cant fucking write at all

    There is to be no flaming, spamming, bullying, or hatefulness of any kind. Debates are fine, as long as they do not provoke people.

    Flaming is against the rules here on Broken Forums, it's one of the very few rules that Seppie set for the users, constructive critisizm is always welcomed by an artists but what you're doing is plain rude and indecent. I suggest reviewing all of your posts on here before Seppie sees.

    Might I ask you write me something better?

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